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At least with no comments, I won't get bash.
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Waldo i'm not going to bash you. I do honestly think though you should have someone proof read your stuff before you post it. You do have good points, the problem though, is that you're gramatical mistakes really take focus off of your articles. Again, i'm really not trying to be a dick but trying to help.
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Do you honestly want to start a career in writing or is this just for fun? I'm asking because I could give you a few tips.
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Right now just for fun, if I was doing this for something it will be better as it is fine for my standards right now.
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I highly doubt the is playing injured, just has shown no signs of it. Yes, he has slumped, but it's not like he doesn't have multi-hit games along the way, and at least in the Arizona series, he wasn't that bad offensively.
