True but 2 things would have me favor Pace.
1) He stole Nagy from Ballard
2) Ballard's McDaniels fiasco
His HC was entirely a late in the day, fall back hire which points more towards luck than skill.
Other than being able to draft 6th, the teams resurgence can mostly be associated with Luck, Andrew luck.
I though Pace nailed his draft but the players Ballard chose weren't available to Pace. Also, the trade for Mack.
The above is exactly why I don't argue these stupid points and who should or should not get Executive of the Year or Coach of the Year.
Everything you said can easily be flipped "against Pace" or "for Ballard":
1) Ballard should not be blamed because McDaniels did another McDaniels thing.
2) Reich looks like fall-back? And still outperformed most rookie coaches while coaching Luck to a great season (unless one argues Luck will always be great no matter the coach and I am unsure he deserves that kind of consideration like Manning had)
3) Ballard picks> Pace picks but you say it doesn't count because Pace wasn't picking the same place so he couldn't demonstrate the same acumen as Ballard because they weren't "available to Pace"
4) Trade for Mack is not really much of a feather in Pace's cap is it? Not as much as it is Gruden thinking the Bears will suck worse than the Packers, Bills, Jets, Niners, who knows how many others?
NOTE: I am not arguing for Ballard nor even really against your case for Pace, but showing how and why I think these are mostly Special person awards although not quite as Special person as Grammys, Oscars, Emmys and the like.