Kool Jet please post your articles in THIS THREAD ONLY!!!!

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I apologize dearly.
This Roenick article is way better. You still need a lot of work, but much improved. Glad you took the advice of conciseness to heart.

Now you should work on paragraph structure. I know it's common to have one-line paragraphs in articles now, but you can combine some of these into a bigger paragraph in my view, or just switch some lines around to create bigger paragraphs.
 

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This Roenick article is way better. You still need a lot of work, but much improved. Glad you took the advice of conciseness to heart.

Now you should work on paragraph structure. I know it's common to have one-line paragraphs in articles now, but you can combine some of these into a bigger paragraph in my view, or just switch some lines around to create bigger paragraphs.
This Roenick article is way better. You still need a lot of work, but much improved. Glad you took the advice of conciseness to heart.

Now you should work on paragraph structure. I know it's common to have one-line paragraphs in articles now, but you can combine some of these into a bigger paragraph in my view, or just switch some lines around to create bigger paragraphs.
Yes Boss!
 

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