Cubs Beginning to Sell...(At Least Rumors make it sound like that)

[waldo7239117]

Chi-Town Cubs: Cubs Beginning to Sell...(At least Rumors make it sound like that)

Thoughts?

 

[beardown28]

Holy crap you have terrible grammar when you write.

 

[waldo7239117]

Holy crap you have terrible grammar when you write.

I don't see it so stfu and give me your thoughts on the article.

 

[Capt. Serious]

Holy crap you have terrible grammar when you write.

Ok Einstein, you do it.

 

[beardown28]

Ok Einstein, you do it.

There's a difference between being smart and knowing how to write. Good call though.

 

[beardown28]

I don't see it so stfu and give me your thoughts on the article.

In all honesty and not trying to be a jerk, did you proof read this at all or did you just skim and submit when you were finished?

Again, not trying to be a jerk but if you want me to give my opinion on the article, make it clear and easy to read. There are a few run on sentences, a couple of times where you change thought mid sentence, you use punctuation in places where it doesn't need to be.

Sorry if I offended you.. I guess you can take it as constructive criticism.

 

[bossdrb]

It's fine. Soriano probably won't go, same with Z, like you said. But alotta people are on the hot seat now.

 

[waldo7239117]

In all honesty and not trying to be a jerk, did you proof read this at all or did you just skim and submit when you were finished?

Again, not trying to be a jerk but if you want me to give my opinion on the article, make it clear and easy to read. There are a few run on sentences, a couple of times where you change thought mid sentence, you use punctuation in places where it doesn't need to be.

Sorry if I offended you.. I guess you can take it as constructive criticism.

I did look over it and it seem fine. I look over it 2 times.

 

[Jntg4]

I don't see it so stfu and give me your thoughts on the article.

"Both of these notes by Peter Gammons are by twitter where you can find it here."

Horrible grammar.

 

[waldo7239117]

"Both of these notes by Peter Gammons are by twitter where you can find it here."

Horrible grammar.

I was in between of how to say it. I wanted to saw tweeted but got lost. It's a run-on but you know what I mean and that's only what I care about. This was not really apart of my article, it was just in there so you know I'm not making it up/

 

[Got teeth? Keith doesn't.]

It's like I'm reading a 6th graders paper.

 

[waldo7239117]

It's like I'm reading a 6th graders paper.

It wasn't that bad, shit. Just keep the trend going.

 

[Jntg4]

It's like I'm reading a 6th graders paper.

No, my brother is going to be a 6th grader, and he has much better grammar than him, though it isn't really good. Notice how even his response to me saying "horrible grammar" was written with horrible grammar.

 

[waldo7239117]

I don't get it. It was not bad, dammit. I was also sick when I wrote it. I will have another article up today or tomorrow and I won't be sick so that should be better.

 

[Got teeth? Keith doesn't.]

I don't get it. It was not bad, dammit. I was also sick when I wrote it. I will have another article up today or tomorrow and I won't be sick so that should be better.

It's not bad...for the 6th grade.

And I was able to write my article after just having surgery on my knee, so stop your fucking bitching.

 

[waldo7239117]

It's not bad...for the 6th grade.

And I was able to write my article after just having surgery on my knee, so stop your fucking bitching.

Sick is completely different. I have a fucken sickness. Which I hate.

 

[daddies3angels]

People he is not doing this for a job.He is writing cause he likes to speak his opinion,stop giving the guy a hard time.

 

[Got teeth? Keith doesn't.]

Sick is completely different. I have a fucken sickness. Which I hate.

A sickness preventing you from spelling coherently?

 

[beardown28]

People he is not doing this for a job.He is writing cause he likes to speak his opinion,stop giving the guy a hard time.

We realize that, but if you are going to post it, at least make it clear and understandable.

 

[waldo7239117]

A sickness preventing you from spelling coherently?

I was dizzy and the words were blurry.